All Comments on 'After Tom'

Outstanding character development, intriguing story line. Thank you very much.

I really enjoyed the the mix of character development. I do hope you continue on and make this a series ... it would be a great read.

Good story so far but the name changes are going to drive people crazy. Sam is also called Jill at the beginning of Jill's piece, and Karen at the end of Jill's piece. With, of course, those names also being used for other people.

Good reading except for a couple of mix up of names in the narration by Jill but then some times such trivial ommisions happen. Any way it is hoped there would be more stories from the same pen.

that she so easily forgot Tom and slept with others for no reason other than she was needy.

Looking forward to next submission. Thanks for sharing.

Sorry about these. I don't think I can correct them without resubmitting and losing the comments.

are a mild irritation but the story line is great. I hope we see a chapter 2 soon. thanks for sharing.