All Comments on 'After Work'

Especially for a first story; you really must bring us more. Welcome, thank you, and please have five stars with my good wishes.

I love the way you describe how much she wanted to be taken roughly, making the preparations before his arrival. You have an eye for finer details which makes me want to read more stories from you. For example the way he made her take her shoes off and emphasised his dominance by towering over her. It turns me on to do this to a girl in bondage. A bit more sexy dialogue and drawn-out description would be welcome, but this definitely got me hard.