All Comments on 'After-work Fun'

U painted a picture of a perfect quickie. Hope there is more to come.

The young gal in this story ( I presume you) is the perfect kind of companion a man really wants if he is truthful. This is a beautiful insite into hot lust and immediate need. Very well done!!! This is not rated as high as it should be.

You, my deer, can certainly paint a vivid and alluring scene.

Yours, Lance

PS. I think pierced tattooed and a bit rude is HOT!!!!😜

I really like your style of writing, which conveys the urgency and sheer filthiness of lust very eloquently and effectively. I hope you will keep it coming (I'm sure you see what I mean!).