All Comments on 'After Work Special'

by Unykorn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

another great story

UnykornUnykornover 7 years agoAuthor
Hi Anonymous

Thank you, I'm pleased that you continue to enjoy my writing. And I hope that you enjoy the new ones that I will be posting soon. Unykorn

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Keep writing

Please make this story into a series, it is good.

UnykornUnykornover 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you Anonymous. So far this story hasn't called to me to add more to it but that could change at any time. I hope that you enjoy reading any further stories/scenes that I submit to the site. Unykorn

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Captivating

Another very good story and interestingly she has a feeling she recognises him. He is also her boss and to be part owner of the club tells us he is a man of means as well as stamina.

UnykornUnykornover 7 years agoAuthor
Hi Gentleone

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. I have some fond memories of people that seemed familiar to me but I couldn't place exactly where from. Then to find out later where we had met before. So good memories will crop up in my stories lol.

William smythWilliam smythover 7 years ago
Beautifully descriptive

BDSM has never appealed to me but a partner like this could change everything.

UnykornUnykornover 7 years agoAuthor
Hi William Smyth

Thank you for your lovely comment. I think the right partner makes all the difference to every experience but especially when it comes to sex and/or BDSM. The wrong partner for either experience can be a total disaster for both of you. Unykorn

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

But much too rushed.

Needed much more in the way of foreplay/preliminaries before going full hog.

Needed him telling her how he wanted her to play with his cock and balls. Needed directions about using her mouth. On what. Where. How.

Certainly needed her tongue active on/in his asshole -- maybe while he fingered hers.

Three stars.

Anonymous
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