All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

WOW!!!! Such a tender and emotional story!

wow, such raw passion and emotion. well done vix. bed xx

WoWza, vix! Sensuality, passion pours out in your words. I could almost feel all the emotions myself. Loved it! xoxo Burny

Character... words making the most passionate love only satisfies if porn is new 2 u ie young. Or it catches that frustrated dreamy stage, when details get in the way of pleasure.. Nearly all free minded people enter that state now and then.

Especially writing in first person you have to create living being...s, You and partners. If not first person the story is invented around people, usually. I am not saying divulge, in fact because of the billion plus who are insanely wrapped round a an insane religo phil or person; and sadly that now has to include bishops and archbishops who can not even find the imagination to invent a gay marriage ceremony, let alone the shit they cum out with on non marital and marital sex relations; I would strongly advise obscurity. The decline of worshippers seems to lead them to wish to insult more, and more. Close the gates there are too few of us!, a desperate last defence. And Budha aside some christo's I met demonstrated humanity!! Compared to other's rel's who I can only assume are going thru their murderous dark ages equiv, before their awakening enlightenment. Side-tracked sos. Point is: safely create a shadow of self Because; on paper, screen, or speaker, never mind real life, only living beings can sexually engage in full delight ..... all right well at least one has to be alive!!! This of course is an early sub... your later tales may be overcrowded with people.. even in regard to orgies. S UK