All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

For such a vanilla coupling story, this is surprisingly good. Keep it up.

I think a little more backgrounder would help. At least some basic info on one of the characters. I had envisioned 30-something adults, but by the end, you called one of the characters "boy" and suddenly, I'm ramping up images of a teenager. This kind of information earlier on would be helpful.

I nearly got an erection