by OneSexyBitch
cut out the overly long and irrelevant paragraphs.
too much padding
Loved the big finish.
also keep the gay shit out of the incest area they have a seperate area for crap like that. at the very least have brains enough to warn the readers in the subtitle no one likes being AMBUSHED by an uncaring ignorant writer.
Everybody got their share of Hard Cock 😁👍