All Comments on 'Afternoon Tea Ch. 04'

i really like the story, but each part is WAY too short...if i were you i would just wait longer to submit the next installment...you could work longer on it, and submit a substantial installment instead of the teasers you've been submitting.

Short chapters are okay. You can't win, really. Short and frequent posts, or long and not so frequent -- do what works for you. That last sentence was a little confusing. Why would he care if there was no servant around? Is he worried she'll think he's assaulting her and want to call for help? Just didn't quite make sense to me.