All Comments on 'Again & Again'

I've read this story and here is my honest review...

Plot - No plot. Just a stroke story under the wrong category. Should have been in erotic coupling.

Quality of story - Very mediocre bordering on the verge of boring. Should have expanded it more to make it interesting.

Grammar - Slight mistakes.

Eroticism - Not hot at all.

Overall - No excitement to the story at all. The narration was monotonous. It wouldn't captivate an audience nor would it leave a lasting impression.

first commentor. Yes, I believe it was in the wrong category for romance stories usually give you back story, plot line, etc. It should have been a short erotic couples story. But it wasn't as boring as the first commentor said. If you were to take it, expand upon it, add back story and a twist, you could have a nice story and not just something to wank to.