by RonCabo
Even though the theme of the story was telegraphed from the beginning, I found it to be refreshingly different and erotic. It gave the individuals the thrill of illicit cheating and the enjoyment of group swapping and it was all melded together very well.
Really enjoyed this - the coincidence of them both "cheating" was well conceived and written, sensible yet erotic. Gave you '5'...
Nicely written, I wasn't expecting the immediate foursome. Well developed, well executed. A definite five.
Great idea, very ncely written, and very erotic in more than one way. Thanks!
A well written illustration that what is good or bad depends on your attitude. Very nice to read a story where four people actually acted like adults. 5*
That's a dinner I would love to be attending. How about deserts all round ? Some nice comments you've recieved, for a mature maybe not probable conclusion. I think it much more fun to hold hands than to get a lawyer. I think our couples are headed to some fun times together.
very clever idea. and well written. i hope you post a few more stories soon. i love your stuff!!
Very beautiful story! I would like to continue, where there will be another couple and the bisexuality of all participants! I am sure that such an author will get a very hot action with incredible descriptions of bodies, passions and orgasms!