All Comments on 'Agent 47-D'

That was brilliantly done, I can't wait to see how it develops.

Pleased you enjoyed it. Alexandra Ryder has appeared in a few other writings of mine already although not to the extent of this one. I plan on changing that but, in the meantime, feel free to look her up at my site.

That was a very well told story.

I remember reading this story elsewhere, nice to see it's still getting around.

Awesome hypnotist, modus operandi, and storytelling for a favorite of mine; was fun re-reading this and remembering why I liked it all over again.

... appreciated. She's a fun character to write when things connect.

The story is okay. Not the best but I’ve given it a 4 🌟. As I read the story, the more it made me wonder if English is your first language.

Errors with punctuation etc are common and can be dealt with easily by the use of a good editor but it was your use of completely the wrong word, usually an adjective, which was so infuriating. I really did debate between giving it a 4 or a 3. The decisive factor was the character you constructed because I like writing about strong women, in a femdom setting, myself as well as reading about them.