All Comments on 'Agent in Distress Ch. 06'

Fantastic! I can’t wait for chapter 7 and all the intriguing mind control that might still be coming. ;)

Thanks for the chapter!

Thank you for this, even if I’m wondering if this Lana is the same as the one in the preceding chapters ;)

I was anticipating so badly the continuation of Lana's slave training, that I felt a little disappointed when I saw the new chapter is a prequel . Now I've got two sequels to anticipate! I truly enjoyed this "flash back" chapter and I'm glad it's not over. You're doing great job and I can't wait for Lana's further humiliation events at both stories. The only problem I see is that the reason of her inability to sense Warric should be obvious to Lana after this chapter. Keep up with the great writing! Thank you for the stories

Really good stuff as usual. But man is Victor a piece of shit.

Chapter 7 was submitted two days ago so hopefully another day. Thanks to everyone for gently pointing out my inconsistencies, you are a merciless group, hehe - but I hope Ch 7 clears up a few things. Hobo, you may really despise Victor after Chapter 7!

Maybe it's worth a revision to rework the chapter? If the information about Lana not being able to read him is something that she heard while eavesdropping

Then it could be a way to show the audience why she isn't able to read Warrick, without the character herself being told it and then "forgetting"

Very solid chapter even with the inconsistency

I hope the manual covers taking care of output operations as well as inputs 😚

I am totally enjoying the story but may bust waiting for her to he plucked!!!

Surely having trouble reading the people you're into should affect males as well? If not it feels like an overly artificial disadvantage for the females in this universe.

Might not have minded that in other stories but this is very well written and forces me to raise my standards, which I say as a compliment.