All Comments on 'Agnes Dourville Ch. 11'

by ValoryG

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300bowler300300bowler300almost 7 years ago
REALLY SUCH A TWIST

FROM A SISSY TO A TRUCK DRIVER, NOW THAT IS A TWIST...THIS CHAPTER IS WAY OUT THERE FOR SURE...HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER STRAIGHTENS THIS OUT A LITTLE, I WAS BEGINNING TO REALLY LIKE SHARON...! BETTY JO xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I get the sad impression that this is the end of your writing with Michael/Michelle

SantacruzmanSantacruzmanalmost 7 years ago
What the heck!

OMG Val! This was really a twist for sure. I guess there are real people that still do interventions so this is believable. My spidy sense says Mike is saving enough money to leave his reformed dad. The way he's living is just work and a young man needs more than that even if dad doesn't. His feelings for Sharon just don't disappear in weeks or even months.

Val, you little vixen, don't make us wait too long to find out if Michele is going to return.

A loving fan,

Santacruzman

ValoryGValoryGalmost 7 years agoAuthor
More

More to come. My feeling is this could extend out to 17 or more chapters. Always enjoy reading your comments ....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
so sad

I saw a happy ending where a boy became a happy girl in love with a girl and perhaps got to give a few blow jobs to a couple of town tough guys and even serve his nice Aunty and cousin. Now he is just a normal guy. So sad 4yourpleasuriam

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This 'so sad' Anonymous faggot

Yo, way to ruin something I'm already on the fence about. He's not a girl, he's acting and dressing up like one and no matter he will die a guy- and then you go 'Oh, he should give blowjobs to tough guys around town' how fucking disgusting- I don't understand you guys and your disgusting fetishes. If you want to see him suck a dick- you waste of an egg- go read gay porn and fuck off. God!

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