All Comments on 'Agnes Dourville Ch. 13'

This has disaster written all over it! Unless his wife wanted him to get his Pang time without her having to give up her ass to do it. Will there be a threesome or just an elicit affair? I'm not a writer and yet you are making me think of these possibilities.

Where are you taking us next?

My patience is rewarded! I knew this moment had to come, and I was not disappointed. And frankly, I, the grammar curmudgeon incarnate (I have proofread a lot and had my written work proofread, too), never saw any of the typos/errors noted by a previous comment. The best thing is that you're implying that there is more to come -- whether a threesome with Anton and Suzy, another adventure in the same venue, or a return to Douglas, WI. Or maybe all three?