All Comments on 'Agnus and Malcolm Smith'

but it is Halloween and this is lit and Un Loving Wifes. TK U MLJ LV NV

and the correct spelling of the name is Agnes.

The writing was good and erotically playful. More please!

Another erotic pleasure. Well done Mary.

WOWZERZ what a story. Damn

that was HOT, wife and panty swapping.

Like a good movie, say "Green mile"

you have to see it a few times and the

same with reading this a few times to

get the most from it.

EXCELLENT JOB MARY !

It only seems natural you would hide

under the cloak of anonymity. I am sure

you could not write a story and get it

posted and because you can't you are

jealous of those who do.

I suggest you pull your head out of your

backside and get with it or are you going

to remain a coward?

A wickedly erotic story so far; the Smith's certainly know more about John and Jenny than they've let on to John! I do hope you follow this up with a part two as I think it would get wickeder still!

What a load of crap

Loved it, no wham bam bullshit. Beautifully written and would love a follow up.

What a weird meeting yet so handled as to be completely believable. When thoughts shift to Jennifer, one realises that she herself is just as much a mystery as these two.I wonder what she has been up to?Ithink that is when I most felt that I was reading Joe Orton.

John seems as if he has spent 11 years completely rootless.MaryR you are a master storyteller