by Piercing_Eyes
This is so sensual, so erotic. Through the detail you can actually feel every touch and every emotion that the characters feel. It would be wonderful to be with a man that's so giving, yet in so much control. Very nice job.
This story was amazing. The detail was great and the teasing was just right, not too much, not too little. Great job! :)
loved it!!! baby you have a gift. i so wished that was me in the stoey. i hope you keep writing. love, jillian