All Comments on 'Agreement Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Part 3 to come i hope. Very hot story

jack30341jack30341almost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Working on part 3, which will be the final chapter. Would love to hear more feedback.

JadestoyJadestoyalmost 7 years ago
Please post part 3 quicker

This had me hot

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyalmost 7 years ago
Wow

Totally captivated!.......please go on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great writing

Awesome! The tension is very palpable, and you left us on a great cliffhanger. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

jack30341jack30341almost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks very much!

Appreciate the feedback!

KazuyaKazuyaalmost 7 years ago
Good job

I'm really curious to see how this ends there are so many different ways to do it

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 7 years ago
Can't wait for chapter 3

Great story, very erotic.

Please keep going.

jack30341jack30341almost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Part 3 is being written.

fullchoketubesfullchoketubesalmost 7 years ago
Great story

Great, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
regret

I would like to read for the next chapter where Bill regret to let his wife and son fucking that resulted to impregnation and romance between Julia and Trevor.And total loss of control between wife and son that with Bill objection.

redlion75redlion75almost 7 years ago
Y

Why did Bill say he wasn't a prop too like something between the parents is false, she said she couldn't get pregnant why not?

69licklover6969licklover69almost 7 years ago
great news

brilliant again and now i am looking forward to part 3 as you have already started writing it.

this genie wont be put back into any bottle lol

onlyfictiononlyfictionalmost 7 years ago
5 stars amazing

Truly phenomenal. Bill and the strange roll he is playing is disturbing, but it also makes this tale compelling. Like the others, I am eagerly anticipating part 3.

O.F.

rodavrodavalmost 7 years ago
Very exciting

While Julia was addressing the City Women's League meeting, if the audience only knew that Julia which everyone admires just very recently had her son's hard cock been inside her pussy and spurting his seeds inside her womb. And in a short while after the meeting. Her son will insert his cock inside his Mother's pussy again and will enjoy an incestuous sexual intercourse.

So very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

Great one!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great read and a wonderful idea and masturbation story

But I wonder why the wife didn't ask why her husband was jerking off to the description. make him tell her he really wants this. That would have been somewhat humiliating for him and bring him along as a cuckold. She could work this to her advantage and her son could be the one in bed with her going forward

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStonealmost 7 years ago
Bill is frustratingly passive and frustrated

Why is Bill's only interest in sex to furtively jack-off while his wife talks about fucking their son? I can see why Julia feels rejected by him. I wish Bill was a bit more active. Thinking about his wife and son fucking makes him hard. So, why doesn't he ask to eat his son's cum from his wife's used pussy? Why not beg to feel his cock squish in his wife's cum filled quim? Julia wants adventure and excitement! Nothing could be more exciting than being double-teamed by her husband and son! That could happen, if Bill wasn't such a frustratingly passive weasel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Much thanks!

A great thanks for a super-erotic, very well-written mom-son story. I hope to read much more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

This is one of your best-- All I can say is please, please,please, please, do one more chapter.

Cyrano1000Cyrano1000almost 7 years ago
Wonderfully Hot and Interesting

An outstanding job. Most of the mother-son stories in this category follow predictable story lines involving cardboard characters. I find this story a pleasure to read thanks to your descriptive vocabulary and the intelligent sentence structure and phrasing which keep the story moving. You have a knack for building the tension and excitement of the erotic scenes in a way that makes the reader feel like an intimate observer. I am also surprised by how each character has its own voice, its own personality and perspective. Bravo and well done. Please continue.

Robdog53Robdog53almost 7 years ago
Brilliant

Outstanding. Well written and plausible, and of course seriously hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic !!!!!!!!

One of the hottest stories I've ever read here.

I agree with other comments this is a nice twist to the mother son story. One of your best. Now I'm going to have to look around to see if I can find more like it. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
One of the greatests!

I loved it! So so hot!

I hope to see more of them. Really awesome

jack30341jack30341over 6 years agoAuthor
Coming Soon

Getting closer to finishing part 3. Hope to have it up soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ch. 3 - Hoping for a Threesome - DP!

Love reading this over and over. So well written, hoping for my fantasy finish with a dad mom son mfm threesome. Cant wait for Ch. 03.

dorsai70dorsai70over 6 years ago
coming soon??

great story... I check every day for the update

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Where is Chapter 3.??

It's been 6 months!!.. good series continue it!! She's in love with her son, don't end it there.. make the story to where she ends up giving Bill an ultimatum of her and Trevor continuing this ,but she moves in with him.. Bill sleeps alone etc.. have her in sexier clothing like pantyhose, thigh highs.. but definitely keep Julia as quiet and submissive as she sounds.. please, author

crawler101crawler101over 6 years ago
are you finishing the story?

when can we expect the next installement of this story.

jack30341jack30341over 6 years agoAuthor
part 3

Almost finished.

crazycujocrazycujoover 6 years ago
came back for seconds.....

this is a hellacious story; can't even begin to imagine where you're going to go with it. the sex scenes are excellent too. thanks......

jack30341jack30341over 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Have submitted Chapter 3. Let me know what you think.

Bluesfan74Bluesfan74over 6 years ago
nice

can not wait for the next chapter! pretty intense

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Wow

What a fantastic chapter to read a second time. I hope there will be more to come please. Maybe she can still get pregnant after all.

TSreaderTSreaderover 6 years ago
OMG!

This is such a great story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Great story, written so well.

jack30341jack30341over 2 years agoAuthor

nestorb30 I think this one is intense also. While I was writing it, I had doubts about whether to add this chapter or not, but the more I wrote, the more I got into it. Thank you very much. jack

pitaya35pitaya35over 2 years ago

Wow. The kisses are way more powerful and erotic than all the sex. Wow.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Powerful love story. The mother finally admits she is truly in love with her son and does notant to share, in any manner. her expression of that love. What I would like to know is now it took the husband 23 years to realize he is a voyeur. The depth of passion, intimacy and erotic chemistry between mother and son described, felt and expressed in this story is exactly how I imagine an incestuous love would be in real life. This is a great story written by a very talented writer. Any avid reader of incestuous love stories must read this one!

rpott122rpott122almost 2 years ago

One of the best written stories on lit....mind blowing....amazing read......hats off to the writer....PM me to discuss more on this.... axbycz7890@gmail

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Bill is really shaping up to be a 5th degree master cuckold. I get it that some people have those urges but this is just a bridge too far. I'd rather the story was just about her and the son. Feel like 2 genres meshed together and it's a little off-putting.

I love the incest stories about mothers and sons when they're cheating on the dad (almost always he's a moron or some vanilla dude so whatever) but it's just not as much fun or quite as thrilling when the dad is into it and even getting off on the idea.

The last line there was lovely. She's finally admitting she's in love with her son. Beautiful. Now to just get rid of old Bill and we're set.

ToughSailorToughSailor3 months ago

Great so far. Agree that she is in love with her son but unlike other comments that doesn't obviate Bill's involvement. Maybe a threesome or some such? . . . .

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