by jack30341
Working on part 3, which will be the final chapter. Would love to hear more feedback.
Awesome! The tension is very palpable, and you left us on a great cliffhanger. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
I'm really curious to see how this ends there are so many different ways to do it
I would like to read for the next chapter where Bill regret to let his wife and son fucking that resulted to impregnation and romance between Julia and Trevor.And total loss of control between wife and son that with Bill objection.
Why did Bill say he wasn't a prop too like something between the parents is false, she said she couldn't get pregnant why not?
brilliant again and now i am looking forward to part 3 as you have already started writing it.
this genie wont be put back into any bottle lol
Truly phenomenal. Bill and the strange roll he is playing is disturbing, but it also makes this tale compelling. Like the others, I am eagerly anticipating part 3.
O.F.
While Julia was addressing the City Women's League meeting, if the audience only knew that Julia which everyone admires just very recently had her son's hard cock been inside her pussy and spurting his seeds inside her womb. And in a short while after the meeting. Her son will insert his cock inside his Mother's pussy again and will enjoy an incestuous sexual intercourse.
So very hot.
But I wonder why the wife didn't ask why her husband was jerking off to the description. make him tell her he really wants this. That would have been somewhat humiliating for him and bring him along as a cuckold. She could work this to her advantage and her son could be the one in bed with her going forward
Why is Bill's only interest in sex to furtively jack-off while his wife talks about fucking their son? I can see why Julia feels rejected by him. I wish Bill was a bit more active. Thinking about his wife and son fucking makes him hard. So, why doesn't he ask to eat his son's cum from his wife's used pussy? Why not beg to feel his cock squish in his wife's cum filled quim? Julia wants adventure and excitement! Nothing could be more exciting than being double-teamed by her husband and son! That could happen, if Bill wasn't such a frustratingly passive weasel.
A great thanks for a super-erotic, very well-written mom-son story. I hope to read much more from you.
This is one of your best-- All I can say is please, please,please, please, do one more chapter.
An outstanding job. Most of the mother-son stories in this category follow predictable story lines involving cardboard characters. I find this story a pleasure to read thanks to your descriptive vocabulary and the intelligent sentence structure and phrasing which keep the story moving. You have a knack for building the tension and excitement of the erotic scenes in a way that makes the reader feel like an intimate observer. I am also surprised by how each character has its own voice, its own personality and perspective. Bravo and well done. Please continue.
Outstanding. Well written and plausible, and of course seriously hot.
One of the hottest stories I've ever read here.
I agree with other comments this is a nice twist to the mother son story. One of your best. Now I'm going to have to look around to see if I can find more like it. Thank you.
I loved it! So so hot!
I hope to see more of them. Really awesome
Getting closer to finishing part 3. Hope to have it up soon.
Love reading this over and over. So well written, hoping for my fantasy finish with a dad mom son mfm threesome. Cant wait for Ch. 03.
It's been 6 months!!.. good series continue it!! She's in love with her son, don't end it there.. make the story to where she ends up giving Bill an ultimatum of her and Trevor continuing this ,but she moves in with him.. Bill sleeps alone etc.. have her in sexier clothing like pantyhose, thigh highs.. but definitely keep Julia as quiet and submissive as she sounds.. please, author
when can we expect the next installement of this story.
this is a hellacious story; can't even begin to imagine where you're going to go with it. the sex scenes are excellent too. thanks......
What a fantastic chapter to read a second time. I hope there will be more to come please. Maybe she can still get pregnant after all.
nestorb30 I think this one is intense also. While I was writing it, I had doubts about whether to add this chapter or not, but the more I wrote, the more I got into it. Thank you very much. jack
Powerful love story. The mother finally admits she is truly in love with her son and does notant to share, in any manner. her expression of that love. What I would like to know is now it took the husband 23 years to realize he is a voyeur. The depth of passion, intimacy and erotic chemistry between mother and son described, felt and expressed in this story is exactly how I imagine an incestuous love would be in real life. This is a great story written by a very talented writer. Any avid reader of incestuous love stories must read this one!
One of the best written stories on lit....mind blowing....amazing read......hats off to the writer....PM me to discuss more on this.... axbycz7890@gmail
Bill is really shaping up to be a 5th degree master cuckold. I get it that some people have those urges but this is just a bridge too far. I'd rather the story was just about her and the son. Feel like 2 genres meshed together and it's a little off-putting.
I love the incest stories about mothers and sons when they're cheating on the dad (almost always he's a moron or some vanilla dude so whatever) but it's just not as much fun or quite as thrilling when the dad is into it and even getting off on the idea.
The last line there was lovely. She's finally admitting she's in love with her son. Beautiful. Now to just get rid of old Bill and we're set.
Great so far. Agree that she is in love with her son but unlike other comments that doesn't obviate Bill's involvement. Maybe a threesome or some such? . . . .