All Comments on 'Ahh Sin City Ch. 01'

If this was my daughter she would be on her way home right now with a sore bottom.

As a fantasy this is pretty hot. Don't know why some people write as if it were real. Why are you reading on this site if you do not like sexual fantasies? Keep writing!

Bonaire

Thank you for the constructive criticism. This trilogy, however entirely fiction, was inspired by a real Vegas vacation I had with my wife. Enjoy, and maybe now four years later I may add a few more chapters.

If you are interested in writing more chapters, I am interested in reading.

No sex therefor no incest. Two things that REALLY turned me off: The statement that he wanted to impregnate every woman he'd been with, and the golden reference to "piss in my mouth and watch me swallow". Follow up if you want more than a one star score . . . .