by Midnight_Flux
thank you for coming back and finishing this story. it put a smile on my face today. i love this story by the way.
It had the perfect ending. You should write more stories along the interracial line.
Thanks for finishing the story. Really well done!
I love biker stories and this one was hot and sweet at the same time. I'm so happy you finished it, and it was a perfect ending. Thank you for an amazing story. Please write more!
Hey, so glad you took the time to complete this story. They deserve their happy ending...
one question, how did her family take it, and would be great to have a story about one of th kids or fritz as he seemed to be a good guy
Oh i loved this story the ending was spot on, thank you for finishing it.
A rough story of true love over adversities. Do you think you have anymore excellent interracial love stories stored up in your mind there you would like to share, because i'm a definite fan.
i love stories like this in general...i love the characters...what girl hasnt wanted to have a sexy biker...great job.
wow. would like to read more about their 15 years. great read.
I had just ran across chapter 3 and hated to start at the end. So I read 1&2 first. I loved them. And chapter 3 turned out to be the best. I saw you listed for best interratial story (above me!), so I had to check you out. You blew me away. Great story and great sex. I wanted to know what transpired during that 15 years too. Strong characters. I look forward to reading your next work =))
...because it was as fabulous as I thought it would be. It was imaginative and--most of all-fun. Great work.
I'm so happy that you finished this story when I first read it I was so hoping that you were gonna continue it and just so happen to come upon the last part yesterday it was really a great story thank you so much for sharing!!
Your story was straight up inspiration to write, keep writing!
Finally well written emotion inducing writing that really takes you somewhere. Keep up the good work!
I read the entire series and at first I didn't think I would like it and almost stopped reading it. I'm really glad I didn't stop!!! I really like this series-never thought how things were back then for interracial couples. Really cool...
I am impress. I like it! I love strong alpha male and sassy woman and best part its interracial. I am glad you finish the story. I forgot about it. I hope you write more... please. DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR TALENT!!!!!
was such a beautiful love story all the way around! Loved the Alpha in him and the submissiveness on her behalf in the bedroom while being defiant at the same time. Love the flow and changes of their attitudes towards each other.
Every part of the Ain't Budging series has been absolutely amazing. At first I thought it was going to be a degrading master-slave kind of story but in the end, it turns out to show that no matter what color you are, love knows none. Very beautiful series, I absolutely loved it. The characters were flawless and the plot line was amazing. Bravo !
Loved the story totally :) Thanks for sharing. I would rather say that the beginning was bdsm than racism. :) As for peoples prejudices it still is there, I'm caucasian and my ex was afroamerican, and we had problems with that as well 30 years later than the story takes place.
made me laugh out loud and couldn't wait to finish--love that HEA. You are very talented.
I loved the whole story ..great work. I actually wanted to read this one to the end.
i loved this story. glad to see it end with them together. keep writing very good stories.
This was one of the best stories I've read. You are very talented.
i hope you are well, this is one of my fave stories :))
I loved your story, the characters were well developed and the story was fun and sexy. Great read.
Aint Budging just about sums up the pig-headedness of Theresa and Rhett...but thank God .....some stories do have a fairy tale ending.
Surely one of the best interracial stories ive ever read....np stereotyping....no snide backhanded hate comments....no prejudices as overriding thme....just real good sex....love....affection between two people of different colour....but deep down both have a longing thats supplants all trials and tribulations.
Excellently tod....cudos to the writer....thanks fpr sharing
This is an exceptionally well thought out story, which is pretty rare in the world of erotica, while still maintaining a nice edge of lust and forbidden love to it. Bravo!
Your story and Therea and Rhett's interactions are good, but you have to learn that you just can't say, "Two Months Later" or "Thirteen Years Later" or whatever. That's a cop-out when you are a writer.
Quite apart from jarring your readers, you don't explain how relationships got from Point A to Point G. It leaves, for instance, explaining how Rhett discovered how he could love a woman who is the antithesis of what his home indicated his values were out there in the ether somewhere. I don't have a problem with them getting back together and marrying. But I have a great deal of problem as a reader (and as a writer myself) with it being presented as a fait accompli.
I would love to see how the club broke up; how the members and their mamas or old ladies chose to side with whomever they did (all sorts of writing possibilities in breaking up the relationships); how Rhett and Fritz elected to pool resources and open a bike shop in SF; the inevitable conflicts between Rhett and Theresa's family -- and/or Rhett's family, now he's going straight; how Theresa helped him come to terms with what he did or had to do in the war; perhaps a sidebar tale about Fritz getting his Vietnamese girlfriend and child out of Saigon when the NVA took the place, perhaps with Rhett's help; how Rhett and Theresa came to marry (and NOT because he knocked her up, thank you!); et cetera. You have, as I said, a good framework and a commendable handling of the sexual aspects of the relationship. What disappointed me was your failure to properly flesh it out.
I was saddened by the outcome of the next to last page until the final one. Glad to see these two with fire in their bellies (and other parts of their anatomy) get together in the end. Very captivating story
5 STARS for sure. Finally a story that has a great beginning, middle and ending.
I really enjoyed this, not just the sex but the story of these lovers. One of my favourites for sure!
Loved the series. I can picture how damn sexy Theresa must have looked. Hope you have more coming like this.
I’ve read it twice and it’s too good for just three chapters
The only other story on here that I love this much is Contrast. You are a brilliant writer. Singularly one of the sexist stories on this site but not only that it is a wonderful, balanced character development.
The only thing wrong with this story is I'd love more of it.
So good to have a story with intelligent characters, with background and history made clear in an understated way. Fab stuff.