All Comments on 'Aire Eird Pt. 01'

This is such a great story. Hopefully, you'll add the other parts. I can't wait!

I love this story. It's written so well. at first i was confused at times because i needed more information but you reveal the information slowly and when necessary. the suspense is great and you have good flow between characters and situations.

There's too much missing. Too few explanations to just drop us straight into it. How did she meet the Light Elves? How did she get captured? How did she become Aire Eird?

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Bit like dropping someone into the middle of the 3rd season of a show with no explanations as to what the show is even about.

To those who are reading, this story doesn't finish. The author stopped writing after chapter 3.

Read on just to enjoy the fantasy... as I am.

Oddly intoxicating, disjointed but seductive, I like it. Thank you 🤩 easy 5Stars.