by cybergirlsex
What an exciting second chapter. I posted after the first chapter, hoping to have them fuck in the seat, but I was not expecting the bi twist. That was very hot! Can't wait to see more.
The second chapter was just too much! The main character never even got fucked, I would have liked it better had you kept it about her and David maybe adding Carrie for a second or third round, but the bi twist was a turn off. It was too much too soon, no build up especially for such a short story