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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great idea but...

It was a great idea for a story and I would expect to have been wanking like mad to it, but the writing and dialogue needs a lot more work to make it convincing...and really erotic. Keep it up though I will look for more of your stories.

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