All Comments on 'Alais Ch. 01'

This is a F..... Masterpiece. Everithing's in there

A fascinating tale, sir, but where be the rest? I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to know what the hecks going on with theses Van'Shin guys(though I'm guessing hostile take over/conquest of the island is on the menu). Well, here's hoping for chapter two soon!

A breath of fresh air this story be.

I really wish you would continue your writing. I've read your other story on here too, and I really like that one as well. You are a talented writer!

I need more. Any idea when you will continue this story? I need to know how it ends.