by VelvetDarkness
I found this story by chance and was smitten by it entirely. I found myself caring about Alais and her relationship with her husband and also wondering what, if anything, would happen between herself and Jack... and if her husband would find out...
Mysterious!
Do you intend to write another installment of this story?
I really enjoyed all 3 chapters! :) I hope you write more soon
it's a nice story. i would really love to see a love story between jack and alais :)
well-written, apparently well-researched, realistic, and hot. I do like how you portray the relationship between Alais and Cynric but manage to make her attraction to Jack so palpable as well. I love it! Please write more installments!
This series has, thus far, been wonderfully exciting. I hope that you continue writing as I am eager to find out what happens next.
Please come back and continue the story... They have the essence of BDSM, and I love them...
till now she is behaving like a normal woman sould choosing sweet jack over abusive cynric
choosing pleasure over pain
as all the sub girls are wired to choose the abusive pimps like cynric over gentle lovers like jack
Personally, I think that the last chapter and especially its conclusion is a powerful way to end this story. This is the life many humans had to live without or with their coerced agreement and the untouchable bonds were mostly forced upon them by people who thought it was the right thing to do. The power and age gap between the two sexes in the marriage was usually immense, as dictated by those in society who needed it to be so and who are we to question those who know better, Many women would have fallen asleep dreaming of a life with the man of her choice, while having to suffer her husband's disgusting attention and this fact would not change for the rest of her existence. To murder him would inevitably get someone killed. It was safest just to accept being unhappy.