All Comments on 'Alana Takes One for the Team'

by Nick Hill

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chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
It's A Read**

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Not bad

Add a couple of chapter it will be interesting to see where it goes

GlennOGlennOabout 10 years ago
Why this is a good story...

I really enjoy reading stories that were written with good grammar and correct spelling. It tells me something about the author's craft and desire for excellence.

In addition, this story is highly plausible. There are good reasons for all of the characters to act in the way that they did. That is unusual in most erotica, and in a lot of mainstream literature as well. My hat is off to you...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
welcome the new company whore

may she make enough money to pay for treatments to the diseases she will get

FreakSlaveFreakSlaveabout 10 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent storyline, very well-written... I want to read more!

bryangriffinbryangriffinabout 10 years ago

good one! please continue

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