by Nick Hill
Add a couple of chapter it will be interesting to see where it goes
I really enjoy reading stories that were written with good grammar and correct spelling. It tells me something about the author's craft and desire for excellence.
In addition, this story is highly plausible. There are good reasons for all of the characters to act in the way that they did. That is unusual in most erotica, and in a lot of mainstream literature as well. My hat is off to you...
may she make enough money to pay for treatments to the diseases she will get
Excellent storyline, very well-written... I want to read more!