All Comments on 'Alarm Clock'

Perhaps you could expand on the story by explaining how this all began...

No need for that. This is nothing but a wet dream put to words.

lol

Just another wham bam thank you maam. How did this "alarm clock" and "morning duties" thing get started?

Just a wicked little stroke fantasy... Can't wait for more!

Good read, keep writing and add more background. Can't wait for the daughter story.

damn great story...looking forward to the rest of the family getting woken up... then maybe fill in the background afterwards?just a suggestion... keep up the awesum work...

Don't care how it all started but I hope sis likes the taste of big brothers emissions and the clinging of moms nether lips to her mouth

Great writing, very satisfying

good concept, keep it up

kick asssssss

Between lay and lie.

Sequel?

Please!

This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking by a gifted writer in his early 20s. Mr. Despliced's hot young balls are obviously stimulated by the idea of a son shoving his stiff fat prick up his mother's mommy-cunt. Sadly, we have no further tales from this talented author. Maybe he's gone from writing about it to doing it? If so, way to go, pal! His hero Kevin fucks his mother as a matter of course, the way it should be for all boys. Nowadays more and more moms understand this, and they open their legs real wide for their boy's stiff young dick, the stiffest there is. Like Kevin's mother they realize their boy's got a pair of hot young balls that never quit, they just keep on producing that rich creamy sperm that drives a mother wild and sets her twat leaking like a faucet. These ladies confide excitedly to their friends that their boy gives them the best fucks of their lives, and these friends in turn go and try it with their own son. These boys are real happy to unload their young brimming balls up the one twat they've always dreamed of---their own mother's. So the world gets filled up with grinning young motherfuckers and their smiling contented son-fucked moms!

we have boys in collage at home that i really wake up that way i look at it like if i drain there balls b4 school thay can do a better job in class

You need to more of the story.

Not sure why you ended the story there? It was very hot and exciting to read. Need to continue the story so we can see how she wakes her daughter.