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Anonymousover 11 years agoNo Build-up
Sorry, but had to get into a story, especially as far fetched as this one, with almost no build-up to the the reader into the story.
tnadnuderabout 10 years agoJust a few small problems
Why is 212 on Floor 20, not 2?!
Also, noticed some missing punctuation.
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