All Comments on 'Alex and Anna'

Liked it alot

It was not a long and developed story. Rather it was a snapshot or moving image of a short time frame of one day. I liked that you brought out the loving surrender in "her", and the gentle acceptance of the control aspect in "him", gentle, knowing, and acknowledging his respect for her. I did find the first line confusing at first; "I had cleaned myself up, and as he locked the door." It left me hanging.

Please write more. I like the way you presented this scenario.

Dave

You evoked the mood of tenderness and need together so beautifully --- please write more!