All Comments on 'Alex and I Ch. 01'

I can't wait to read more! Please write longer chapters, I have a feeling this is going to be a story I keep coming back to :)

Hey, This is my first submission so I wasn't sure exactly how it was going to work. The story Alex and I is sort of long, but I will make the chapters bigger in the future. I hope everyone likes it, I like it, and please leave me feedback whether positive or negative (however; please be constructive with both). If you have thoughts on what could have been better than I really want to hear them. Thanks!!!

You got me hooked in the first chapter and I can't wait for more. I'm glad to hear you'll be posting longer chapters :-) It's interesting already.

Happy Writing!

this sounds *very* interesting, and I can't wait for more. Saw the note about longer chapters :) yay!

pretty good. Love how you're building up the characters...pretty cool! Nice job on your first submission. :)

Looking forward to the next chapter..how many are there anyway?

Cheers! (:

Hey this is a really great story so far i hope to read some more really soon

You have to read Everything written by this author, and hopefully we'll see him book signings... If conventional book stores exist in the future. For now I feel proud and honored to be allowed to read his material here. BUT don't stop here! Be sure to read all he posts. I'm only thru chapter 4 of "God's Angel" and have been moved by several 'religious' experiences. No pun intended. This writer is that talented. His words Reach out and can benefit so many people, it's not just a Gay thing. I'm working thru cancer treatments and find comfort in the touching companionship he writes about, and simple wisdom he so subtlely imparts along the way. Take it slow ... And listen. The message is there.

Loved the hilarious fag hag - especially because she was absolutely right. But I'm glad I only started reading this story after it was complete. This is my third or fourth time around.

More, please !