All Comments on 'Alex & Jason Ch. 04'

alright, good story, i'll give you that. and i know what it's like to get into the moment when you're in the middle of writing a sex scene. nevertheless, using "drug" as the past participle for "drag" is completely unacceptable. for future reference, it's "dragged," alright?

on another note, i've enjoyed all the characters up to this point, and you've developed them well. kudos to that.