All Comments on 'Alex Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good

but really hard to read with the constant change of narrative

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
pov????

it is a good story but it would be better from one POV only

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

That was a really nice read! And with nice I mean... you know ; )

Glad you two found each other to share your kinks with, living out (only role playing of course) or writing down of a secret fantasy is one of the best feelings out there!

m_vic_p23m_vic_p23over 2 years ago

I loved how the story weaved through both characters pov so beautifully. I also love how much Alex is being manipulated and forced, but also how much she wants and enjoys it. Great story! I hope to see more like it!

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