All Comments on 'Alex Wants His Stepdad Pt. 01'

by Corey1995

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
amazing

I loved this!!!! Please write part two soon

papabeardougpapabeardougover 8 years ago
Super start

This was a great start and can't wait to read more chapters

PB

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sexy step-dad

Maybe dad will let Alex do this again, this time taking the tank top shirt off, and caressing/licking dad's delicious (hairy?) chest and pecs. If dad has sexy hairy legs and thighs, imagine what the chest must look like! Dad might even get so turned on he would reciprocate?

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Amazingly hot, continue the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good start!

Excited for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Lovely but consider....

My only suggestions to you would be to watch your tenses, you switched from present to past several times in the beginning of your story and to watch things such as capitalization; for example, Friday. Also things like my daddy or Daddy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More!

I can't wait till daddy wakes up to his son bouncing on his lap. Oooh... Fuck me daddy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
anon reader

please finish this series!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More, more, more

What happens next man? This story is hot please write next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
HEYYYYYYYYYYYYY

please write a part 2 like yesterday!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Need...

Please finish the series!!! Too hot not to finish

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More more

I want to know what happens!!! Need more it's amazing not to finish

DaddysSonDaddysSonalmost 8 years ago
Second Part

YOU NEED TO DO THE SECOND PART ASAP!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Omg!!

You better finish this and not leave us hanging!

bradfrompabradfrompaover 7 years ago
WOW! HOT

This is a really hot story! The details are sexy and it is very believable. Like the other comments, I want to read how the story continues. Corey1995 is a great author and I love his passion and enthusiasm! Let's go to Part 2!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Stepdad started sharing me.

As you progress with this interesting story I would love to read some on your stepdad sharing you with his friends but you remaining in control. Maybe getting them to have sex among themselves and you telling them what to do. I also love discriptions on eating cum, maybe you describing how stepdad and friends take to eating cum.

Keep writing, you have captured my interest on this great beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing

I believe this is a very good story but the story is short. I would love a part two

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
U make me hot

After reading your story all i wanted was your dick. I want to be your lover.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please continue.

Please continue with this story, the first chapter was so hot ❤️

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
great short read

wish there was a little more tease, a little more sex, but good start

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

Good story, jumped too quick into sex scene, more details make the story nice and hot!

Sonnyw55Sonnyw55about 2 years ago
Rushed

Slow down a bit. This story was a bit rushed.

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