by Corey1995
This was a great start and can't wait to read more chapters
PB
Maybe dad will let Alex do this again, this time taking the tank top shirt off, and caressing/licking dad's delicious (hairy?) chest and pecs. If dad has sexy hairy legs and thighs, imagine what the chest must look like! Dad might even get so turned on he would reciprocate?
Please write more!
My only suggestions to you would be to watch your tenses, you switched from present to past several times in the beginning of your story and to watch things such as capitalization; for example, Friday. Also things like my daddy or Daddy.
I can't wait till daddy wakes up to his son bouncing on his lap. Oooh... Fuck me daddy!
What happens next man? This story is hot please write next chapter soon.
I want to know what happens!!! Need more it's amazing not to finish
This is a really hot story! The details are sexy and it is very believable. Like the other comments, I want to read how the story continues. Corey1995 is a great author and I love his passion and enthusiasm! Let's go to Part 2!!!!!
As you progress with this interesting story I would love to read some on your stepdad sharing you with his friends but you remaining in control. Maybe getting them to have sex among themselves and you telling them what to do. I also love discriptions on eating cum, maybe you describing how stepdad and friends take to eating cum.
Keep writing, you have captured my interest on this great beginning.
I believe this is a very good story but the story is short. I would love a part two
After reading your story all i wanted was your dick. I want to be your lover.
Please continue with this story, the first chapter was so hot ❤️
wish there was a little more tease, a little more sex, but good start
Good story, jumped too quick into sex scene, more details make the story nice and hot!