by zephyr20
"Alexa and Chantelle" has long lingered in my mind as an exciting introduction with lots of great potential. It is extremely gratifying to see a 2nd installment!
And it is certainly maintaining the excellence you displayed at first. I'm very happy that you've continued it.
You have set the scene in the first part of the story and now you have so much more you can go into. The descriptiveness of the BDSM is excellent but agonizingly to little.
Chantelle could have done so much more to Alexa and her subseviance could have gone so much deeper.
You also could have explored Chantelle's feelings for Alexa.
Love this too! I don't care how long or short, that doesn't matter at all. Mmmmmmm. Utter submission and sensuality. Wonderful.