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All Comments on 'Alexander and Julie'

by magicneophyte

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
It would have been a decent story if you...

...had been mindful of your PPOV. Make up your mind whether you want to you first person or third person then stick to it.

sexymomma57sexymomma57about 11 years ago
so far so good..

good imagination.. makes me wonder how it will end

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