by DDDDave
was going good until you let your childish crap get in the way. Oh well.
For readers who like stories with full busted women and where the sex involves those big beauties and the nipples in more than incidental way, this is a delightful turn-on. Bravo!
This chapter was great. And I'm really envying Tommy. This isn't BE like your classic works, but I'm enjoying the series so far. Keep up the good work.
This is a fantastic series, you have to keep it going it has a lot of potential!
Knowing that readers like what I've written is the only compensation for writing. And I know that not everyone likes/enjoys these stories - I don't mind constructive criticism and if I can learn from it, so much the better. I'm always trying to do a better job, describe scenes better, find new ways to go over similar events.
On the other hand, I don't usually take other's ideas and try to write to them. My mind doesn't work that way I'm afraid!
Can't wait to see where this goes and how these three add to their relationship.