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AJ_WatsonAJ_Watsonalmost 16 years ago
Excellent

A really dark and disturbing story which really does fit the category of erotic horror. Lots of the stories listed are listed as such just because a character dies at the end, this was a really thoughtful and well written work

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
That's some fucked up shit.

And I mean that as a compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wow

the story is dark evil and twisted but the auther definatley is an amazing writer i wouldnt want to meet her but i would definaly read part two

NCnakedadventureNCnakedadventureabout 14 years ago
That was a damn good story!

I'm not sure if it makes me a sick fuck or not, but I did get hard as I thought of being inside you as my life came to an end.

Truly_TessaTruly_Tessaabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

To say the human mind is a complex thing is a massive understatement, i was riveted from the beginning. Truly a very distrurbing story but i admire the way the authors fluid style of writing draws the reader into every detail effortlessly. Depsite its complex nature there is no second guessing no confusion and his/her ability to cram so much into so few words is wonderful. Thankyou for an inspiring read!

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