All Comments on 'Alice Amoeba Ch. 02'

Ooohhh, normally I don't read stories about revenge, but this is so original (and I do enjoy your stories) so I decided to read it. I still don't quite understand how Roy became like that. Was it "Alice's" goop?

While some people may be squeamish when it comes to revenge (all that "vengance is mine, sayeth the Lord" from their childhood) I am totally if he really wanted the scum of the earth to get whats coming to them HE would do it and not pander to their every want and desire and with the way this is setting up this promises to be a beautiful comeuppance!!!

Jelly/slime/goo girl story is the best thing in the world!

very creative and original, great to see this much creativity made soooo hot!

been reading since THE BLOB THAT ATE ALICE CH.1

cant WAIT for part 3

btw i love all your stories!

When's ch. 03 coming?

Part three will take awhile as I am working on other stories at the moment. Plus, trying to put together what happens next has been difficult. I'll probably get back to it when the ideas come. I hope everyone stays patient, meanwhile thanks for reading :)

awesome!

I laughed when her imune system went "fuck it"

XD

This is the 1st time I have read this story and ask myself why I took so long to read it. You have a vivid imagination and it shows in this story. The plot and character development are exquisite. I have put this story in my favorites list and plan on reading allnyour other stories. Keep putting stories like this on the site and your reader/fans can only grow. Retired Army NCO

I dont think I can be aroused without that horrifying image in my head, If you dont want the shit scared out of you leave after chapter one.