All Comments on 'Alice and Joe and Joan and Charlie'

by LynnGKS

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
both erotic and humorous

The thought of the first cheating couple thinking that they were getting away with having elicit sex with an other's mate while all the long they were being cheated on too. Good hot sex and well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great

realy great story, i liked the tension, short , explosive

sirhugssirhugsover 14 years ago
Loved what there is

but wanted more - the foursome or swapping seemed slighted. Could have had much more involving Charlie and aftermath.

lonerider10lonerider10over 9 years ago
very nice!

this story was hot all the way around. no chapter 2 is needed

TwentysevenTwentysevenabout 9 years ago
Ace

Great story. No idea why you got so few comments.

Tail_GunnerTail_Gunnerover 8 years ago
hot .... Hot .... HOT !!

god what a hot story !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very droll

This was really funny. Keep it up!

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Very dull.

Just more of this fool's cuck and whore garbage.

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Damn, Really? This the best you got?

funtungnfrogfuntungnfrogover 1 year ago

Fun story. I can just imagine the complexity, excitement and expectations. Now I want to know how Charlie ultimately reacted as well as how did the party go after that.

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