All Comments on 'Alice Ch. 04'

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Anonymousalmost 14 years ago

wonderful please hurry with more

Anonymousover 13 years ago

enjoyed it

i enjoyed your series on alice.... seeing a strict catholic girl want to be punished is very hot. hurry up with more chapters

joodle about 11 years ago

Yow

Well I must say this story has pushed my limits, literally. The punching and pissing is out of my league, but the erotic energy of this story is what makes it good. The "Daddy" talk is usually a strict turn-off, but in this story it doesn't seem to represent what it normally would: a father-daughter relationship. It seems to represent he ultimate vulnerability and submission between a slave and her master---the twisted balance between rough and extreme, and tender and protective. Dan seems a bit of a psycho, not sure what to make of him. Alice obviously has an extreme fetish, which is fine. I just hope she is not being taken advantage of by a prick with cruel intentions. It would be nice to see a continuation of this story, maybe a happy ending, if that is possible? The basis of the story seems to get in the way of a happy ending and maybe that is the issue here. Pull it out of the hole---no pun intended. Work your literary mojo and finish this thing!