All Comments on 'Alice Gets Taken'

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FLAngelFLAngelalmost 14 years ago
great story

Other than some minor spelling errors (rye=bread-- the word you wanted was wry) it is a great story! Would love to see you follow up with a story where she confronts her attacker. The trainer maybe?

Gave you 5 stars! Keep it up!

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