by CassieJo
Pleast do continue, don't cut the story short if you have more to add.
To be continued........maybe.....
Umm, NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO, Please continue with the story when you are able to. I am so in love with this story. I think that you are doing a great job. Please kepp it up.
Please don't stop. I am addicted, I look for this story everytime I come to this site.
I really like your story and I eagerly await the next chapter. Its true you could use a little editing but I think its fun, interesting and charming. Also quite original and engaging. More please.
I stumbled across this today and read the whole story (so far), I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to more. Please ignore the anonymous comment obviously it from an ignorant person.
I know you've had problems finding an editor. Hang in there, you'll find one. Congrat's on graduating... I know *first hand* how hard this time of the year is ;)
I just wanted all of those who have been emailing me wondering if I was writing anything to know that I just sent off a brand new story to my editor. I will be alternating between Alien Prison and my new story when it comes to putting out chapters.
Love Always,
CassieJo <3
I just read the entire story today and couldn't believe how awesome it was. Please keep on writing it.
Hah, I love reporting dickwads :D Loved your story! Waiting for the next part - allthough I find "too much happiness" a tiny little bit unrealistic, since everyone's relationship has its ups and downs (which is funny, since sci-fi isn't supposed to be realistic in any way...). But however!
You did great on the darker aspects so far, please don't lose them too soon!
I have finally gotten my new story, 'Three in One' edited and posted. Thanks to my brilliant editors. It should be up either Thursday or Friday. P.S. thank you to everyone for voting and commenting, it makes me very happy. :)
<3 CassieJo
Need to read the next chapter and have answered how no one thought to look for Cobra??? Well written hun
Please continue the story! It's quite interesting. :) Can't wait to see how the relationship between Drak and Te continues.
I liked this chapter b/c you answered a lot of questions. I feel like you fleshed out some things more than in previous chapters. I see this is written last May. I hope you plan to finish it.
Please continue this story. Dying to know whether Cobra is going to make a reappearance
Finish it !finish the story!:3
I WONDER IF ICE PRINCES CAN HAVE BABIES ? HMM ! MAKES YOU WONDER. AND WHO WERE THE GROUP OF PEOPLE IN WHITE IN THE CAFETERIA ? AND NOW THAT TE IS STARTING TO REMEMBER WHEN HE CALLED MAR, MARSHMALLOW, AND SOMEONE IN WHITE WAS SPYING ON THEM IN THE GYM. WHAT ELSE IS IN TE'S BRAIN ABOUT THE ATTACK THAT SOMEONE MAY NOT WANT HIM TO REMEMBER. AND TE'S OLDER BROTHER SENT HIM OFF TO EARTH BY HIMSELF. WAS IT REALLY TO PROTECT HIM OR COULD HIS BROTHER HAVE SOMETHING TO DO WITH THE ATTACK ON TE THAT MADE HIM FALL INTO THE OCEAN AND HIT HIS HEAD ? AND WHO KILLED TE'S PARENTS ? AND WERE THEY TE'S REAL PARENTS OR FOSTER PARENTS ON EARTH WHO TE THOUGHT WERE HIS REAL PARENTS ? HMM ! QUESTIONS ! QUESTIONS ! STAY TUNED ! SAME TIME ! SAME CHANNEL !
To this ? It's been several years since a post was updated. I'm sorry to see another story go unfinished. Hope All is well in your life
It's a shame this wasn't continued. It's better than some stories I've paid for.
Oh, my gosh. I would pay money for this story and I am usually the type to go only for the free books on my Kindle. Masterful story telling and to hint at this all just being a dream. NO!!! Don't leave us hanging and please reassure us he gets his happy ending! Please, please return to this story!!
It's been years since this was written and the author may not even check this site but please continue this story!
Such a great read, however I am a little frustrated!!! I want dark to plow Te!!!!!! 😈
Oh noooooo please write more. I need to find out what the white person was !!!
One of the best gay stories I've ever read!. You might not see this but please continue!