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Wow, thanks I loved it - very sexy and naughty also. 5 stars. Now off to read your other stuff!

Really good, but needed more. Either to figure out who it was at the end, or some more foreplay hints earlier in the story. Maybe Jessica was the one who opened the window and masturbated as she watched her husband take another woman? Maybe it was Brian as Tom went out to buy something at the store? Needed just a little more to get the 5th star. *4