All Comments on 'Alka Makes Three'

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dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
Very Nice!!

Everyone got what they needed. Thank You for a very nice little story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
34 E

GET REAL

34 B ARE MUCH NICERA3F1

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Peek - Peak

Is there no one here who knows the difference?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great sexual fantasy, I guess.

Nice depiction of unbridled lust. Not sure what the plot was. They met a stranger from India, enjoyed her company, and fucked her. Have a nice day. Guess this was kind of like a trip report: this is who we met and what we did. So the point was to titillate the reader and provide some stroke material? I would have enjoyed some drama, suspense, or maybe even some warmth and humanity? Too animalistic for my taste. Bet you really enjoyed writing it, and imagining it. Have a nice day.

Ladypleaser10Ladypleaser10almost 6 years ago
Great story about Oasis

Great story. Oasis really is a lot of fun

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Retired and still making good memories with some time on my hands to imagine and draw upon our experiences for inspiration. Fantasies shouldn't end at marriage. They should be enjoyed in the security of a long and loving relationship.