All Comments on 'All a Sister Needs is her Brother'

a break away to brother getting text, what happen after in the morning

This was a good vignette of bro/sis love over time, believable characters and intriguing story. All in all a decent first attempt but you should try for a longer and a bit more complex next time. So far this gets a solid 4*

Enjoyed the story very much.. What happens the next day, please do a Part 2.

They seem to really be in tune with each other bodies..

Keep up the good work..

This was a good story. It had all the parts to be a believable plot. I really liked it and it wasn't to long it was just write. It's been awhile since I've read a story on here and I'm glad I came across this one. I hope everyone else enjoys it as much as I did.

Enjoy all!!

Extremely realistic situation, very well written. Work in some revenge against her husband in part 2.

Well done. Please make it longer and flesh out the characters more. This could lead to a great series or just stand on it's own. Well done.

Hope her parents and Adam punish the bastard.

Hope you add new chapters.

Truly hope you will continue with this story.

What a lovely story!

It was a great start to what looks to be a fantastic story, I hope the second part is in the works or is ready to be released.

It had everything you could hope for in a story: love, sex, intimacy between them.

I loved it!

Recently, a friend confided in me that she was a victim as was I. Her's was a worse attack. Being the kind man that I am, I counselled her. She will probably lay charges. She said I am her favourite customer and friend. She is smiling. When I find out who the creep is...think of Overprotective Dad crossed with Akil the Bounty Hunter. Period.

Well done. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

Good tale.

When a body in inert on the floor and a crowbar placed across the throat with one end arrested by the bed...well, who's to say what happened when the police find the body and no weapon?

This is a very good story with a well developed plot and characters. Can't wait for chapter two.

I live with my bubba and this is exactly how he is. This story made me so happy its honestly my favorite I have ever read on here.

short but sweet. could use a sequel where he beats the others guys ass.

Where is the rest of the story ???????

I will look at the next chapter, and so how it goes.A+