by WokeUpOneDay
AWFUL WRITING STYLE WHEN IT COMES TO VICK'S LINES
Vick was NOT mentally challenged. As it says in the story he never went to school. He didn't even know how to read. He grew up with his parents (also uneducated) almost completely isolated from society until his mom died. No one in the story but Vick knew these things and he died with the knowledge. Sorry if that wasn't clear, but that was my motivation behind him.
Must be a classic to try to get through that. By classic I mean dickens or jane austin.
Just did not enjoy this, not the writing nor the story. You've done so much better in other stuff, I just hated this one.
A hard start, but I was quickly enraptured. I was laughing by the end.
I know that this isn’t school, but the first page of that was so brutal I couldn’t even get through it. I would love to see you clean that up and type it normally and then I would love to give this a read.