All Comments on 'All About Zack Ch. 04'

I've just read it from the start to half of this piece. It seems somewhat similar to "Carol's school tales" (another of your "series" that I liked).

A little too "unrealistic" in how some events are triggered and (at least for me) with too few descriptions of her clothes.

The rest is good, especially the way she falls little by little :D

I really hope this all is true?????

No way would anyone lose or give this kind of control to a prick like Zack. It is a totally preposterous story & I will not waste more time with further chapters.

Your story really has the ring of truth to it. It very much resembles my relationship with my step-mother, Michelle, particularly her submission to me and her extreme enjoyment of being made to do things where there is a risk of getting caught. Keep up the good work!

great use of tension. really good description of the sex, you captured the moments well

and they still haven't fucked.

the slow burn is too slow.