by MrIllusion
This hot group needs at least one more chapter to tell about the aftermath!
Will they tell him a more complete story of them getting together? Will this be a regular thing?
This reads like a true to life story with a bit of embellishment toward the end. True or not it is an excellent story. Well done!
Nice job on this one. It was smooth and interesting all the way through. Thanks for spending the time to write this and share.
Beautiful story. The pacing, the build-up, the horniness, all dexterously done. I don't want a sequel; my imagination is too well fueled; or do I?
I think that this might be the first time I've regretted that the star rating only goes up to five stars.
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WOW!
The story was great but the editing was awful. I guess I am a spelling snob and the punctuation combined with the spelling hurt my teeth. Other than that, I would have given you a 5 or more rating. Keep writing.