All Comments on 'All Business Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice

I like that he has started to get more demanding with her. Don't let him give in to his feelings and go soft on her...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I don't get it.

She does an abrupt 180 degree switch from being so pissed off that she tries to catch him out by recording him, yet by the end of the same chapter, with nothing more than the reinforcement of the exact same threat he's been using for the last 3 chapters, she's acting like she's in love with him? I mean, it's obvious that she doesn't want it or she wouldn't be trying to put a stop to it. That can't be written both ways because it doesn't make sense.

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