by Lisa Summers
What a trip.
I didn't know whether to laugh or cry, the latter was appropriate.
One of the best I have read in my 70 years of life. Good luck and keep writing.
Hi, Lisa
This is my lucky day! I found your sexy story, and also found that you had written many more--and all of them lesbian stories. It will take me quite a while, but I intend to read them all. All my best to your and Karen.
ive always thought stories like this would be strange..but this is so heartfelt and ...WOW!
I agree. This is one of the best stories I've read here over several years. The plotting, the characters, the execution, and, oh yeah, the hot sex, are all superlative. Congratulations, you've done well.
I loved the twists and turns of the story. But, more than that....the love they shared for one another...speechless.
Hi Lisa, I've been a fan of yours for some years but this tale is unique and so well told. Thank you so much.
Beautifuly written, such a sad haunting story, but so comforting all the same.
I really enjoyed this story. It is not something I normally read but it turned out to be a pleasant experience. I will be sure to read your other stories. It was nice to see that the story itself was more important than the sex part of it. Thanks again.
I DON'T cry reading internet stories! I don't! I read a story a while ago that made my eyes water, but your story had them streaming down my face! That was absolutely wonderful and I cannot wait to read more of your stories!
Best wishes!
Iris
Oh my God... That was really touching. I cried when I read the end. Wow, you were great with twisting the time stream between their lives.
Thank you for writing such wonderful story.
oh my god, this story is fucking brilliant! ...that's the closest i came to crying from reading a story. thanks for that high :)
this story transcends erotica into literature. the sex itself is a little cliche and could be made more interesting by making the dialogue less predictable. the premise and the storytelling are superb, though, and the "loop" that's created between the two characters makes this the best story i've read here.
This was such a wonderful love story. The erotic was a plus, but the story itself was simply heaven. Please, please, write more.
beautiful ,sad, glorious.
a celebration of love that made me feel so much
I laughed, I cried and went between the two like a rollercoaster ride
please Lisa ,write more
You are wonderful !!!!
best wishes
Amanda
xxxxxx
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Mystery and paranormal. Novel time me thinks.
Like another commenter this is not a genre I would normally read but picked up from the similar stories list. I enjoyed it immensely and will read more of your work as this is easily among the top stories on here. Keep writing as there are few others on here that even come close to the wonderful level of your work.
Beautifully written, erotic and passionate, it's a GREAT story.
HP
The best I've read thus far. I am truely impressed by the depth and the passion.
A story worthy of being read more than once.
Brilliant! What incredible imagination. I loved it. Just out of interest, your title is also a German saying - 'in der Nacht sind alle Kätze grau' - at night, all cats are grey.
Strange, intriguing, scary. A very interesting story indeed. I use the word 'scary' because I can see the two on an endless loop of life, love and death for ever.
As a lifelong (well, since I was about nine and that's a very long time ago) aficionado of supernatural tales, I think this story is right up there with the best of them. A couple of other people have mentioned the 'loop' and that is what chills, the thought of two people alternately finding and losing each other for eternity. Lisa, you're great!
Brian
I loved this story very much. Somehow it's nice to think that life does come around to those who truly believe.
Lisa
I love ALL your stories and have even started to buy some from Amazon.
Frankly, though, until now none have made me cry, but I loved that story totally. The tears are happy tears, in the main.... and maybe a few tears for who I would like to be....
with affection
Corinne x
Honestly one of the best stories I've read. Looking forward to more!
Your story is brilliant, beautiful and had driven a 72 year old Englichman to tears,
What a beautiful love story with a great twist! Thank you, again absolutely wonderful.
Beautifull tender story. You write so many different styles of tales... you are good
Your way with words are so incredibly sexy! I love how you surprise in a genre that, let’s be honest, have little surprise left. I love your shameless love for those kinky desires that I too find lovely; the ass, the scents, the tastes, the mature, the not perfect, the saggy, the cross-generatinal. I wish... I want... I need for your stories, your words, your desires, to be my life. -They surely are everything on my mind as I lay in the darkness, waiting for my lover in the darkness. Such a wonderful story!
Not only a very sexy tale but one of the best time-travel? stories I have ever read.
Reread today for second time, and still resonates — an intriguing setting for a love story. Enjoy all of the work that emerges from your sometimes crazy imagination, but must say this piece is truly memorable. Finally taking a minute to share my thoughts, though did send you “contact” email. Hope all going well,
What an intriguing story. I thought that the first part conveyed the innocence of young Laura really well. I'm not sure that I can see why Laura can't see the young Melissa when Melissa can see her.
Time loops, with all their inevitable flaws, are always endearing to me.
This is not bad one, and I'll remember it quite a while.