All Comments on 'All for Mom Ch. 01'

The flow was a little rough. A bumpy ride from event to event. Keep writing!

I like incest stories esp mother daughter this plot lots of oppertunities lesbian sex

but the aunt and uncle have already fucked the mom,so why wouldn't they just do it again,don't get why they needed to talk her kids into fucking then getting mom involved

makes no sense

I like where this story line can go. Not so fond of the end of this installment (there WILL be more, right!) being right in the middle of the action, but I am not telling the story, so my complaint is only for effect. Let's find out how this goes, SOONER than later!

Oh fuck, I am going to act this story out with my two live in girl friends and a couple of hot young chicks they know, we will fuck and suck each other sensless and more. More and more of this please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lancashire, UK

You start some good stories but as soon as you start to get somewhere you stop.

You really need to continue this with further chapters

Loved it! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

This is without a doubt the greatest example of an author who has never actually had a conversation with a fellow human being in his life. The dialog and how the "family" communicates is just so hilariously unlikely and unrealistic, it needs to be preserved to show budding authors how NOT to write fiction.

The best fiction is based in reality, with a few rules changed to make the story work. This is just based in a loser's horny brain.